i love the start of c.1 that athenaphoenix643 made! hears what i added on: (i included athenaphoenix643s part of the chapter.)
It's the thriller! THRILLER!! I sang in my head. I loved listening to music. But one thing I loved most was reading. Now I'm reading Frankenstine.
This monster book was just enough to satisfy my reading needs. It had adventure and it was mysterious. Creating a monster was just like magic. Such power to be put into something human made seemed impossible. In fact, the monster was stronger than its creator itself.
But back to the topic. My name is Shannon. I had just moved into Lilacdrive, and it was all good. Although I had left my friends, I made new ones. I got to see more of the world and almost everything felt right in the world.
It was until the day of the thunderstorm. I actually happen to like storms a bit. For one thing the sound makes cool noises when it hits the window. For another, I got to stay night and snug inside. But this was one night I wish I could escape.
like i said i used to love storms. i USED to love a lot of things. every night my mom would come in to my room and tell me she loved me. not any more. for my mom was in the hospital dieing! so tonight, my dad came in. but instead of him telling me great things, tonight he had something terrifying to tell me.
"Shannon the hospital just called. your mother..." "is she... dead?" i asked. my dad could only nod.